Weekly challenge: 50 words

Impossible kiss’ belief moments after, contradicting past, present, longing moments of absence. Warmth caresses, then chill void, broken link gaping numb; seconds’ eternity’s storms’ eye inverts; finality stages in theatre repeat; imagination’s scope blurs- false or true? Surface to truth then submerge, replay endlessly pleasuring dreams shared with then gone.

In response to http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2014/04/07/writing-challenge-fifty/

Thoughts? Suggestions? I’m not 100% satisfied. What story do you hear? My mindscape was specific but this was left open.

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